KJtheSleepless's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A stroll through Dan's Necropolis]

This is rather... repetitive. I know you said it's meant to be easily looped, but it was a challenge to listen even for 18 seconds. You get 1 star for the fact that the instrument sound was in fact a good one.

My suggestions to you:
- make that melody longer so it will actually function as an "A section" for your music
- write a second melody to act as your "B section"
- make sure one section can lead into the other smoothly when it's looped
- pat yourself on the back for a job well done

6clawdy6 responds:

Well, I've never been very confident in my music making abilities, so I was expecting a review like this one. I have been trying to come up with some decent tunes, so I might keep a remake of this song in mind for the next time I open FL Studio back up. Thanks for the tips, man! The last one had me giggling a little too. :)